I won't be.

I dunno :)

                                      I Won't Be.

Who gave you permission,

To enter my heart ?

And now like a vampire,

I can't keep you out.

I won't be impressed ,

By the way that you love me,

The way your body knows mine,

How they fit together like pieces of a puzzle.

I won't confess the way you make me tremble,

Or the way I yearn for you,

When you aren't here,

Or the satisfaction I get from making you mine.

I need to be the victor,

So why do I bend to your will ?

Without a single protest,

I accept you and everything you promise.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You've been glamored by that vampire...it can't be helped. What we want and need and what we accept are very often not the same thing and so we bend to the will of others. I liked this poem Vidya, well done.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Blue .Sometimes we can't help ourselves :)

[Simran Kewlani]

It's a simple but meaningful poem.
You don't need to be something you don't wanna be. Remember that V. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aye I shall always remember that .Thank you sweet Simmy :)

[FateDictates]

loved this simple string of solid words that stained with a statement!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much MeOnlyMe :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow, interesting! This honestly left me speechless when I finished reading, my fingers hobered over the keyboard for a couple minutes before I even clicked on the comment box. There are some people in life who are strangely impossible for us to resist, though deep down, we think we can say no and turn away whenever we please. But we decide to give in completely, get involved, get attached cause we know that's the best idea, what'll make us feel better. Knowing in some way, we have them, whether its in the right way or not. We let them own us before we can reject. In our hearts, we secretly knew it was going to end like this. Scary how much I could relate to this...I love it!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow thank you so very much for this lovely review.I am so glad that it struck a chord with you :)

[Mirra]

I was reading this while listening to a love song so instead of feeling the sexiness, I felt love here haha ^_^ Great work Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......thank you Ink.You made me smile :)

[Mirra]

Glad to make you smile :-) You're welcome Vidya!

[XenoMar]

Abolutely amazing. This makes me what to find my poetic side again.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Xenomar :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the theme of this...and yes, Vampires get that taste...and we are done...they will suck us dry, keep coming back for more, and we are at their mercy...no longer in control...i like how you let that control go in this piece.
nicely done..

jacob

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much Jacob :)

[Chris Micha]

I know a woman who fits this description! lol

I could so feel you trying to resist but having problems doing so. It was really emotional and I really liked it, ma'am! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Chris for your lovely review :)

[ron]

WOW OMG Vidya this is amazing...sighing
I need that so bad. Fantastic write this got me all hot and bothered ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...........glad to make you hot and bothered for a change lol.Thank you Red :)

[ron]

You are most welcome Vidya ;)

[s y e]

Oh hot damn my lil patootie!!! I think I should go open the windows and just sit outside there for a while, LOL! This was hot and romantic and passionate and sexxxyyy all at the same time. Oh la la!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......you sweet lil mama.You give the very nicest reviews my cutie patootie,Thank you :)

[s y e]

Haha, I'm glad you think so. I'm just being truthful with my lil patootie! We be sistaaaas. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

True that luv :)

[s y e]

Love youuuuu!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lurve you too :)