Imperfect

Imperfect

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

Nobody's perfect but you are perfect for me.

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                                                               Imperfect
Tell me your secrets and I will keep them,
Hold out your hand to me,
And you will never have to wonder,
If I will take it,
Beg forgiveness from others,
But simply ask it of me.
When I fell and hit the ground hard,
You were there to pick up the pieces,
And sort through them until,
You got it right,
How do I look now sewn and stuck together,
By the sweetest mad scientist?
You love me just fine,
Scars and baggage and broken dreams,
And so do I,
Even when you seem so distant,
There is always a bridge that leads me to you,
Even when your shadows are the darkest.
I can find you,
Just there in the rhythm of my heartbeat,
Just waiting,
Because you know I will come,
Just perfect,
In the midst of your imperfections.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Love is not about finding the most perfect person.Its about finding the one who is perfect for you.

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two imperfect people come together and find trust with each other...baggage accepted, no fee...

and they fly towards their dream...

i love this...and especially the part about not having to beg for forgiveness...just asking for it...

and usually it is given before asked, if the partner is the perfect one for us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Very true my friend.Thank you for this wonderful review and understanding of what I meant.
You love me just fine,
Scars and baggage and broken dreams,
And so do I,
Even when you seem so distant,
There is always a bridge that leads me to you,
Even when your shadows are the darkest.

I love the entire poem, but this verse just curls right up in my heart....
A beautiful poem for the one you love!
:) Julie


Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Julie :)
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. I had to come back and read it again. It is lovely. Going in my library! :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Aww you are very sweet Jules and thank you again :)
Is a lovely poem Vidya. Thank you

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Baby :)
Vidya this was beautiful:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Jon :)
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10 Years Ago

Your so very welcome, I been away for awhile sorry my friend just had to find myself:))))))))))))))).. read more
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Well you seem found so that is good :)
That's very nice. Sometimes people love us for our imperfections. My late husband comes to mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

I wrote it about my husband and he loves me imperfections and all.Thank you Marie :)
Perfect in the midst of imperfections... yes, that is the richness of love. Great work here, Vidya!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rita :)
This is amazing. It will make for a really good song. i'll like to hear this over and over again

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Wow...this is love... to love every imperfection with perfection...What an emotional and gorgeously penned write, truly loved each line. Your loving heart shines through your words brilliantly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Kalypso.Your words warm my heart :)
This is a beautiful love verse, and one which has come with a lot of pain and knowledge.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

That it did.When you've been to hell you appreciate things more.Thank you Kit Kat I know you underst.. read more
I completely agree with everything said in this poem; it's perfect :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Laura :)

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Added on May 23, 2014
Last Updated on May 23, 2014
Tags: secrets, forgiveness, broken, dreams

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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