Destiny's Blade

It speaks for itself I think.

                  

    

I have thrown myself on destiny's blade,

And dragged you from the battlefield your ransom paid,

I would face the pack and grant no quarter,

Sacrifice myself like a lamb to the slaughter.

 

But as soon as you were free,

Into her arms you would flee,

And bid me understand, your eyes so kind,

Unaware of all the ways you should be mine.

 

And I love you more than my heart can contain,

For you to be happy I shall endure this pain,

And when you need another valiant rescue,

I will be the first one there fighting for you.

 

If the only place I can look at you is from the shadows,

Lest I come into the light and my feelings show,

Then I choose this path though fool I be,

Against these chains that bind me to you I shall never struggle to be free.

　

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

A strong emotive write from you. A different write that has bee developed well :)

keep it up :)
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[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Anand :)

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

Wise words from such a person. What are character you've proven yourself as. I love this poem. It is very creative and as unusual.
"Then I choose this path though fool I be,
Against these chains that bind me to you I shall never struggle to be free."
That is a very creative line. I LOVE IT!!
　

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww hello Lix nice to meet you and thank you so much for your lovely review :)

[Avinash]

Painfully beautiful poem Vidya. But I will wish that one should be out of such vicious cycle but at the same time when you are in love, nothing is in your hands.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very wise words there Avi and so true.Thank you :)

[kublakhan27]

The most painful of sacrifices, if one can call it a sacrifice...conceding one's love for another to ensure their happiness...obviously a sad piece but you've spoken with crystal-clarity...an incredible piece that truly touched me...well done as always Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you KK.As always your words mean a lot.I hope all is well with you my dear :)

[PoetryPenPal]

This poem is amazing. I have no other words to explain the overwhelming emotion. Amazing. Just amazing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my little poetry pal :)

[PoetryPenPal]

No problemo!

[Simran Kewlani]

This poem sure does speak for itself.
In fact, it screams it out. Your words are gentle but loud.
Amazing work, Vee. (:
(I hope I can call you that.)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes you may call me that.I am thrilled you liked it Simmy.Thank you :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Yayy! We gave each other nick names. You're so sweet. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha .So I hear it must be true.Thank you .You are also very sweet and oh yeah we did :)

[New Theory]

Excellent, I rapped it up. Its verses are musical.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Theory .Your review is musical lol

[New Theory]

Ohhh yeah :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......sing it my friend :)

[icelandicblue]

This sounds absolutely excruciating. It begins with a blade and ends with chains...you've captured the hell of such an existence. Nice work, as always.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Blue.Yes I believe someone in that position would be very sad .