The Siren's Song

Following a path that is already set

                       Siren's Song

 

 

In another time penned by a kinder poet,

You would be mine,

Unfettered by the chains that bind you,

Have you not felt me?

In the rustling trees?

Have you not discovered me?

 

Hiding just in the fringes of your memories?

Don't you hear my laughter?

Echoing in your mind?

We have met through lifetimes past,

Our destinies merged into a single path.

Whose map is etched on our very soul.

 

　

Surrender yourself to my siren's song,

And bask in its seductive serenade,

Sink deep in the ocean of my promises,

And let the phantom desires of your heart,

Enshroud you within its beckoning rhapsody.

And realize you know my song by heart.

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Author's Note

It is what it is. I'm just not sure what it is lol

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

Whatever it is, it's beautiful. Haha. Great work!

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol.Thank you Britt :)

[Woody]

what a beautiful poem and what exquisite words!! stunning!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Engluva :)

[s y e]

Holy schmokeroonies girl, this is absolutely a favourite of mine! This is a deep and powerful right that is so very relatable and holds so much meaning. These are words that will stay with me forever and ever...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you lil mama.That is one of the nicest reviews I have ever gotten :)

[Madalyn Beck]

I love this, Vidya! Absolutely stunning!! This is definitely a favorite for me. These are deep and heartfelt words and they write themselves onto the soul to linger with that person forever. I surrender to your poetry! Fantastic! xo (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Maddy for this lovely review :)

[Rachelle]

A soul's cry unleashed from the core
Unfettered, released and ready to soar.
Many an eon had a search ended in vain
Relentless the journey though mired with pain.
And so when you discover the one meant for you
Risk everything for him all your life through.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Rachelle.I believe that you are right :)

[Michael Stevens]

This is excellent, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you stick :)

[New Theory]

Epic, I loved this, its when you write something out and then you dont know why you wrote it, but when you read it later you know that those are the words from deep in your heart which even you are not aware of. Just one thing though in second line, You would be mine

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol yes I will fix that.Thank you Theory for always being kind :)

[New Theory]

Its easy when you are so amazing :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you again :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

I surrender to the beauty of this write and its many facets. You beckon what is etched on your soul. Excellent...:)........................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you Sami K

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Vidya Bacchus]

...............:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[ron]

I have surrendered my soul to the songs of oceans love and accept what bounties she has offered me. Oh what delightful bounties await such a pitiful soul as mine.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well look at that your review is even nicer than my poem Red lol Thank you :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya but it's not as nice as your poem :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Red and you are welcome .If you say so ,sigh :)

[ron]

Your most welcome Vidya. And yes I say so ;))

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol........alright then :)

[Saddam]

Surrender yourself to my siren's song,
And bask in its seductive serenade,
Sink deep in the ocean of my promises,
And let the phantom desires of your heart,

I have surrendered myself to your poetry. Great art of collecting things so easily in this effectivilly way... such a nice poetry.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Ssaad :)