The Siren's Song

Following a path that is already set

                       Siren's Song

 

 

In another time penned by a kinder poet,

You would be mine,

Unfettered by the chains that bind you,

Have you not felt me?

In the rustling trees?

Have you not discovered me?

 

Hiding just in the fringes of your memories?

Don't you hear my laughter?

Echoing in your mind?

We have met through lifetimes past,

Our destinies merged into a single path.

Whose map is etched on our very soul.

 

　

Surrender yourself to my siren's song,

And bask in its seductive serenade,

Sink deep in the ocean of my promises,

And let the phantom desires of your heart,

Enshroud you within its beckoning rhapsody.

And realize you know my song by heart.

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Author's Note

It is what it is. I'm just not sure what it is lol

Reviews

[m.s.early]

Very lovely Vidya. Your pen is strong in this one. It speaks sultry and magnetically and its muscles tug at my desires. You found a sweet spot on the page. Very nice :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww hey Xavier its been a while.How are you?Thank you very much :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

There's not way to tell how well-penned this poem is. Words in this case go beyond comunication, they show, they sing, they make you think. Loved it !

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh WOW... I loved this, the song of love echoing over a lifetime to find the one that is already on another path that leads them away from you. Such a beautiful write, felt deeply and relatable... gorgeous.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you Kalypso for these lovely words that made me smile :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is the greatest destination we can head for… lovely piece of writing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Cowboy :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[Simran Kewlani]

It is amazing. Keep this spirit, Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Simmy :)

[MAC]

oh I so want to hear this someday.........what an amazing write. every single time I read you I swear must have been listening to my life. I should read you more often to see what will happen to me tomorrow :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....you made me laugh and I take that as a lovely compliment :)

[AMMD]

It flows in seductivity. Brilliant write!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Angeline :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhh girl, you are one alluring Siren, indeed!...

I was mesmerized by your song... it was soothing and enticing...
as if you put a bit of magical elixir without me knowing it...
and ta-da!.. you have me hypnotized! ;D

A gorgeous write, Vidya!~xoxo~:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......Thank you my sweet Robbie girl you have made my day with this lovely review :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this...my pleasure! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

The author seems to be longing for her destined true love to recognize her song. A wonderful write, Vidya, I have emerged, and put the "stuff" back in the box for a bit. To sort another day.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very glad to see you Kit Kat.Thank you very much :)

[Deuces]

Sounds like telepathic love. Two people speaking to one another that aren't speaking, but know they are destined for each another. A beautiful piece. A unique kind of seduction, one of the mind more so. Very well penned, my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you G for this wonderful insightful review :)