Barbwire love

Barbwire love

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
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Sometimes you can't help yourself

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                                     Barbwire love

 

They told me to run,

Hide away from your hypnotic lure,

Like a magnet you pull me,

Away from every logical thought,

The sound of your voice whispering my name,

Ushers me into the arms of insanity.

 

We clash like fire and ice,

Every heated word effective foreplay,

Your touch it sears and runs deep,

Till you are like a fever raging in my blood,

I would drain my veins,

If it would cure my affliction.

 

I am everything you want,

But nothing you need,

You are my weakness and as the pendulum swings,

I bring you to your knees,

Wrong or right,right or wrong

Together,both or neither.

 

You have etched your name,

Across my heart, my soul,my psyche.

And claimed me as yours,

Branded for eternity ,

Imprisoned by our barbed wire love,

Felled by its double edged sword.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
A song spawned this.Sorry :)

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An intricate piece. Kinda remind of a hate and love relationship I have wit someone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Skye .I appreciate your words :)
Painful but it's love. Very intriguing....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Lauren :)
That sounds really painful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Marie :)
I love this. I think it's creative. Nice work ^-^
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shaquana :)
A love hate relationship can hurt and be very rewarding too...so I've been told and you describe that bitter sweet state of being very well, I very much enjoyed this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Leigh for your kind words :)
This hit me really hard. I know this spawned from a song, but it happened in real life for me... Great job. Wonderful read, fantastic pen! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Hello Chelsea nice to meet you and thank you so very much :)
Konigin

10 Years Ago

Nice to meet you too Vidya! :) And you are most welcome. :)
' I am everything you want, ~ But nothing you need,'

Any song that makes you admit to that is both enemy and friend! Tis, for me, the core of this amazing piece of writing: sensuous, frank, deep and dangerous. And, what's more, is absolutely nothing to apologise for. Passion in everything whether reading, listening, dancing, cooking, walking etc. is what life's all about. Isn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Emma for this wonderful review :)
Wow Vidya I loved this:) a bit of all in feeling:) Awesome my friend:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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10 Years Ago

Yes miles after miles of smilessssssssssssssssss:)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Haha yes so very many miles over the oceans yes :)
0000000000000000000000000000

10 Years Ago

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Complex love story depicted by multiple layered expressions.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Avi :)
Don't be sorry, we all get inspiration from a song once in awhile. A powerful superb piece of seduction with that bit of passion. When we are in it real good, it's hard to stop. We get caught up in it all, we want more of it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank You Rose.Actually a lot of my inspiration comes from music :)

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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