Barbwire love

Sometimes you can't help yourself

　

                                     Barbwire love

 

They told me to run,

Hide away from your hypnotic lure,

Like a magnet you pull me,

Away from every logical thought,

The sound of your voice whispering my name,

Ushers me into the arms of insanity.

 

We clash like fire and ice,

Every heated word effective foreplay,

Your touch it sears and runs deep,

Till you are like a fever raging in my blood,

I would drain my veins,

If it would cure my affliction.

 

I am everything you want,

But nothing you need,

You are my weakness and as the pendulum swings,

I bring you to your knees,

Wrong or right,right or wrong

Together,both or neither.

 

You have etched your name,

Across my heart, my soul,my psyche.

And claimed me as yours,

Branded for eternity ,

Imprisoned by our barbed wire love,

Felled by its double edged sword.

Author's Note

A song spawned this.Sorry :)

Reviews

[Saddam]

This is very memoriable poetry. Very beautiful.

You have etched your name,
Across my heart, my soul,my psyche.
And claimed me as yours,
Branded for eternity ,
Imprisoned by our barbed wire love,
Felled by its double edged

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you Ssaad :)

[Awakened Rose]

oooo what a thrilling piece. One of my favorite lines were "I would drain my veins,
If it would cure my affliction." I love how its dark and twisted in a sexy and feminine way. Loved this poem :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Rose for this awesome review.It is much appreciated :)

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Melissa :)

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Rose of many colours]

Nice trend of thoughts........

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Moonera :)

[Anita Singh]

"Till you are like a fever raging in my blood,"
This line is just WOW! Awesome work, VIDYA! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow thank you again Anna :)

[Sami Khalil]

"You are my weakness and as the pendulum swings,
I bring you to your knees,
Wrong or right,right or wrong
Together,both or neither."

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Sami K :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).....................

[Rose Black]

I like it is Strong and really beautiful.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Rose :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like the title of the poem, the descriptions of the content tell the story in detail.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my sweet friend :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful just beautiful. :-)

Kaze~

[Chris Micha]

Very beautiful indeed. The torment of desire and the mind trying to rationalize it, can be exhausting. I thought this was a perfect way to describe it. Bravo!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Christian for this lovely review :)