I Will Be There

I Will Be There

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

When someone is there for you whether happy or sad.

"

              I Will Be There     

 

I know how sad you are sometimes,

As you hide your wounds from the world,

I have seen your scars,

And traced your torment with my fingertips.

 

I see your tears like molten anguish,

As they blaze a trail down your face,

You hide them like a hated shame,

You dare not let them see.

 

Smile for me just once ,

So I can say I made you laugh,

Even when you didn't want to,

Even when your heart was breaking you did it for me.

 

Through Time and space ,

I'll be your friend,

And accept everything that you are,

Because everything that you are is the very best.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
For a Friend.

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This is so touching! It's hard to find friends that really care, so when you do, you hang onto them. Wonderful job with this! :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Britt.That is true :)
Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. Keep up the awesome work.
You are truly a great friend.. such tender and loving words here, Vidya...xx

Anyone who reads this will feel the sincerity of your heart.
I for one, am glad to have your friendship... thank you for sharing your words...

What a heartfelt write for your dear friend.~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Robbie sweetheart.Your words are always so sweet and I feel honoured to call you my friend.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

You are wonderful...(((hugs)))~xoxo~:)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

So are you hugs hunny ...............:)
An excellent, personal, poem, Vidya!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you stick :)
This is such s sincere poem. It's awesome having friends like this in world where there can be so much negativity. Nicely penned! :)

-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shaquana .That is the truth :)
This is the sweetest write I have read as a tribute to someone. It is a great feeling when you know someone is going to be there for you through thick and thin. A lovely friend indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you noodle oodle.Yes I believe you are very right :)
Wow. This is probably one of the most beautiful and sincere writes I have read in a while. These are my favorite lines for sure.

"I have seen your scars,
And traced your torment with my fingertips."

You speak of the anguish and pain and wanting to be the one to take that away from someone. So many people would be able to relate to this, that is for sure. Great job! xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Maddy for this very wonderful review :)
Through Time and space ,
I'll be your friend,
And accept everything that you are,
Because everything that you are is the very best.

This is very sweet and beautiful poetry. Great poem. Kash real dost ease ho pate. Great write dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ssadd.Always glad to see you :)
Aaawe, so sweet what you did here for that friend of yours. It's great having a friend like this that will be there when you need them to cheer us up and all, even when we don't think we need it. Terrific piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rose .Yes we need to appreciate good friends because they are so few and far between :)
BlackRose

10 Years Ago

Yes, EXACTLY. So few that others alot of others would take for granted. I know and sure you had know.. read more
Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills. 

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Thank you AA :)
Very beautiful and full of sincere emotions. Friendship is a treasure and that treasure should be shared and appreciated. Excellent...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time...:)..................
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

................:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:)................................

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Added on April 8, 2014
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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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