never ever say I quit. never give up. time sets everything in balance !
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I can relate to this feeling of believing in someone and being taken advantage of..It is a terrible feeling and at some point - reality has to set it and you have to say enough is enough. You have made your point well in this well written poem.
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Jules you are very right.At some point we have to say enough is enough.
This piece is so heartfelt. A relationship which started so beautifully turned into something so sour. And all that is left in the heart is anger and regrets.
"It is amazing that you cannot see,
The way you tear me apart,
The way I still yearn to be near you,
Even bleeding and broken beyond repair." This hit home in many ways. Thank you for sharing this, VIDYA.
We think a lot about what we experience and wish we could take back...relationships can be filled with regrets and missed intentions. I cringe myself over some things and they just pop in your head sometimes and we have not control over it. Your poem brings those things to light for so many. Poetry is such a good way to move on such as this one Vid.
Ah! I hate seeing someone as beautiful as gorgeous as marvelous as horny as cool as you feel sad and bad right lay on a bed under the shed of a man feeling cry and sad. This poem's all about the agression of an angel. Words're get plucked from the heart and bleed onto the paper.
Keep Writing!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Aww thank you Neon for your lovely review.I will keep on writing as should you because you are an aw.. read moreAww thank you Neon for your lovely review.I will keep on writing as should you because you are an awesome writer my friend :)
10 Years Ago
Thanks, pretty for the beautiful kind scented marvelous words, your words make my day, night and my .. read moreThanks, pretty for the beautiful kind scented marvelous words, your words make my day, night and my whole life. Am glad to make an angel smile again after a long time. Hey, pretty .... are you working on anything new? :)
10 Years Ago
I must admit I seem to be stumped right now.Not a poem comes to mind.I hate when that happens but .. read more I must admit I seem to be stumped right now.Not a poem comes to mind.I hate when that happens but the more I try the harder it is to write lol
Lol, yeah sometimes when I pull a chair to sit and type some words on a keyboard, most of the time, .. read moreLol, yeah sometimes when I pull a chair to sit and type some words on a keyboard, most of the time, words don't hit on my mind how to write and jot down but when they come, believe me, they're all go fired up and YOU KNOW IT..:p HAHA ISN'T IT?? :)
10 Years Ago
Lol ..Haha! Am again honored to make some glow on an angelic face, pretty. Thank god, your a good an.. read moreLol ..Haha! Am again honored to make some glow on an angelic face, pretty. Thank god, your a good angel. Cus, me too love good angels not cause I am afraid of bad angels but I don't wanna lose my image I've built in the eyes, into the depth of the hearts of good angels :) So, stay good, pretty..but yeah, sometimes, you can be bad after all.. sometimes, I love bad angels and love loosing my image as well ...And angels love it. How funny is that! Haha!
Powerful Vidya...I get the feel this relates to a love relationship but it also can apply to other relationships. Both friend and family. When others blame everything on you and refuse to see their own error it can be hard. Yes we yell louder to be heard...to say HEY!! WAKE UP! But thats usually in vain. Very compelling write... ;-)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Red and you are very right it can be about anyone that we love that takes us for granted.
Superbly penned, great pathos, simple but extremely effective. You convey the feelings you feel in such a natural way it looks like we're there with you.