Two sides of the coin

Struggling with yourself

          Two sides of the coin

 

I am this person,

But you change me into her,

Who in the blink of the eye ,

Can bring you to your knees ,

With a smile on your face.

 

I am different than she,

Sweeter,quieter,better,

But she has all the fun,

While I am busy being good,

I'm jealous of her sometimes.

 

She knows what she wants,

And exactly how to get it,

With a sultry smile ,

And a wicked gleam in her eyes,

You willingly follow her into the fire.

 

I think she would wreak havoc,

If given half the chance,

And run roughshod over all those in her path,

But I am looking and realizing,

That the only one in her path.....is me.

Author's Note

Thinking.Just thinking

Reviews

[Woody]

a very interesting piece. I tend to agree with Marie about the split personality.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....maybe who knows ?Thank you kind sir :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Thought-provoking. Nicely penned. I enjoyed.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Britt :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful piece, I really liked it. Nicely written.

Kaze~

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Kaze :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-D

[Penny]

Yes.. I am also thinking. Give her a little chance, trust me you'll do better. I stopped the competetive, extrovert part if me for year and it did me no good. Hey.. i am involved in your poem. Well done.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Penny.You may be right :)

[Penny]

My pleasure... and I am always right, hehe. Keep writing

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......very funny you :)

[Delmar Cooper]

This is a very interesting thought. I admire the way it addresses the dichotomy of affection. The rough and the smooth of the thing. That strange business where the mastery is in service and the service in power. Good thoughts - thanks.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Delmar for this lovely review :)

[Neon]

Lol! Well, don't feel bad, pretty. Devils love making angels happy, No matter how far an angel is.
By the way, now may I ask, what inspires you writing this piece??? lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Neon.I wrote it when I was thinking about how sometimes the good girls might like a go at being bad lol

[Neon]

Haha! Whoa! Not this makes much sense. Yeah, bad angels are not even that bad cos they better know how to pull a rein of their devils feeling the warmth, the sigh, the relief and of course, the joy of the life all the time throughout the whole life :P ahahah! So..It means, you felt to be bad one that time when you penned this coolio write?? Huh? :P So, how bad you became? let me hear ya NOW ...HAHAHA

[Vidya Bacchus]

OMG .You make me laugh so much.I am a good angel not bad at all :)

[Neon]

Lol ..Haha! Am again honored to make some glow on an angelic face, pretty. Thank god, your a good angel. Cus, me too love good angels not cause I am afraid of bad angels but I don't wanna lose my image I've built in the eyes, into the depth of the hearts of good angels :) So, stay good, pretty..but yeah, sometimes, you can be bad after all.. sometimes, I love bad angels and love loosing my image as well ...And angels love it. How funny is that! Haha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Uhh Huhh I hear you Neon lol

[Neon]

Lol! Your just still as awesome as nice as sexy as hot as before. I loved talking with ya, pretty.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Love talking to you too my friend :)

[Basu Gupta]

Bitter truth..
I personally liked this ""while I am busy being good I'm jealous of her"
This I think the very powerful line n I'll remember it always..
nice piece n thanks for sharing

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Basu.I think we all want to just let the other side of our personality out sometimes :)

[Basu Gupta]

Agreed..everyone does that..
great write I liked this poem very much

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you again very much :)

[Marie]

Sounds ike a split personality to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That it does .Thank you Marie :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, do we really know a person by observing them? Can we tell what goes on in their brain or in their heart? Not totally...and then there are many who show the world only a facade. It's true, some men (and some women) fall for this sort of flirty person....a person who has no inner substance at all. It boggles the mind. Still, you can not allow it to change who you are.....you have to be happy when you look in the mirror. Good work here. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Lydi for this wonderful review :)

[icelandicblue]

We are sometimes even more than two people. Sometimes we act sometimes we don't. Sometimes we do and regret it.Other times we kick ourselves for missed opportunities. We are multidimensional but it's hard to wrap our minds around more than one self image. Sometimes you wish that other person would just take over and fix or take over it all but I think the DSM ( Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders) has a name for that lol.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow thank you Blue.Yes sometimes I wish I could yield to the lure of my darker self :)