Promises

Accept me.

                           Promises

Walk with me on a deserted shore,

Share a sunset with me before it is no more,

Let us entwine our fingers as we entwine our hearts,

And wax poetic about never being apart.

 

I want you to be a man of your word,

To believe in me before my defence is heard,

I want a reason to believe in the happy ever after,

Even when reality intrudes with its mocking laughter.

 

Handle gently my dreams because they are easily broken,

Understand my desires before they are spoken,

Look into my eyes and fathom my story,

And find out the truth before harbouring theory,

 

I am so quirky my temper is hot,

Make peace with me when pride tells me I must not,

It seems so much to ask of any man,

But then you accepted it all when you asked for my hand.

 

 

             by vidya

Author's Note

Something romantic be kind :)

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

Absolutely beautiful. Great poem!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Shaquana :)

[New Theory]

Love is in the air Vidya, to be with the one you love and the delicate intimacy that is being shared with the loved one is absolutely blissfull.

A small poem for you and your partner. God bless you.

Just the clouds and just the sea
A place beyond the common man's reach.
There we will be.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Nice lines there Theory.Thank you my friend :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome.

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I loved it and your really awesome in rhyme:) the end was great-I am so quirky my temper is hot,

Make peace with me when pride tells me I must not,

It seems so much to ask of any man,

But then you accepted it all when you asked for my hand.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Jon.Sometimes simple says it best :)

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Yes its does:)))))))))))) Your very welcome my dear friend:)))))))))))))))))

[Zahra]

This is really sweet, beautifully crafted. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much :)

[Lydia Shutter]

When a romance blossoms, each participant must realize the other is not perfect....for no one is. To accept someone with all their quirks and to be there to support them when they fall, well, that is all part and parcel of true love, isn't it? What a lovely write this is....could be wedding vows! Beautifully written. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you for your sweet words dear Lydi :)

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This was beautiful, my dear poetess :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you sweet Lynn :)

[Baby Ricochet]

A lovely romantic ode. Good one vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you BR :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Your ability to describe love so beautifully is amazing. I love how soft and gently your poems touch my heart and leave a mark of your poems in my mind. Amazing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very sweet .Thank you Simran :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you and you're welcome. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

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[xDalliance]

This poem is soo amazing! :o :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you hunny :)

[Rossen]

Struck all the right cords...the honesty a food for love... true desire... .
softly fashioned in a bezel of precious time...

Rossen

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Rossen for your kind words :)