Promises

Accept me.

                           Promises

Walk with me on a deserted shore,

Share a sunset with me before it is no more,

Let us entwine our fingers as we entwine our hearts,

And wax poetic about never being apart.

 

I want you to be a man of your word,

To believe in me before my defence is heard,

I want a reason to believe in the happy ever after,

Even when reality intrudes with its mocking laughter.

 

Handle gently my dreams because they are easily broken,

Understand my desires before they are spoken,

Look into my eyes and fathom my story,

And find out the truth before harbouring theory,

 

I am so quirky my temper is hot,

Make peace with me when pride tells me I must not,

It seems so much to ask of any man,

But then you accepted it all when you asked for my hand.

 

 

             by vidya

Author's Note

Something romantic be kind :)

Reviews

[MAC]

sometimes I do forget that real romance is about blatant truth with each other. Love this so much, can't begin to tell you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Mark.I am humbled by your kindness :)

[Penny]

"Look into my eyes and fathom my story,
And find out the truth before harbouring theory"
Lovely lines. Very emotive, every girl wants that. Cant tell you how much I liked it. After what happened yesterday with me, I can see myself writiing thede lines. You have become my voice. Thanks for sharing. In sadness every little joy you ask for, you deserve seems too much but when you find someone who actually fulfills your wishes it seems like a dream. And if the transition happens toquick, it makes uyou go crazy. Keep writing. Take cate.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Penny.Your review is very much appreciated.Take care hunny :)

[Penny]

My pleasure totally. You too take care.

[Vidya Bacchus]

................:)

[anxia]

Gosh, this is so beautiful. Each and every word is so very well picked up and set together. Though I wish I could tell you more, all I can say is 'AHmazing'!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey Anxia.Thank you so very much sweet friend :)

[Deuces]

Wow. Another rhymer who has matching rhythms? Nice to meet you :)
I love this for its flow (which was great), its message, positive vibe and the desire for love.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Again ,Thank you so much G.Your words are way too kind but I accept them so you cannot have them back:)

[Deuces]

They're yours to keep :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you again :)

[icelandicblue]

This is so softly romantic. It was sweet and vulnerable and perfectly delightful to read. We must be accepted in our entirety and that is a heady prospect.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes Blue they must accept all of us the good and the bad :)

[redflutterby]

The last line says so much. When they take your hand they take it all. Every part of you and your heart. This is beautiful and wise. I enjoyed it so much...;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Red .You are a sweetheart :)

[writ rajat]

This is truly romantic, Vidya!...

You conveyed love and acceptance, as well as releasing pride....
all these things that make a relationship work...

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)
Love is in the air Vidya, to be with the one you love and the delicate intimacy that is being shared with the loved one is absolutely blissfull.

A small poem for you and your partner. God bless you.

Just the clouds and just the sea
A place beyond the common man's reach.
There we will be.
When a romance blossoms, each participant must realize the other is not perfect....for no one is. To accept someone with all their quirks and to be there to support them when they fall, well, that is all part and parcel of true love, isn't it? What a lovely write this is....could be wedding vows! Beautifully written. Lydi**
Your ability to describe love so beautifully is amazing. I love how soft and gently your poems touch my heart and leave a mark of your poems in my mind. Amazing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my Writ !!.Your words have truly warmed my heart and soul.Thank you for your sweet words and I appreciate your poem.You are the very best :)

[writ rajat]

thanxx for appreciating my poems but above words are not mine

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is truly romantic, Vidya!...

You conveyed love and acceptance, as well as releasing pride....
all these things that make a relationship work...

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my sweet friend :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's always a pleasure... (((hugs)))~xoxo~:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

The pleasure was mine :)

[maria ( rose)]

A lovely romantic piece,, Great job!
-maria

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Maria :)

[maria ( rose)]

your very welcome :)