The Endless Wanderer

At the end of our life realizing that we are all alone.

                   The endless wanderer
Ebony skies  proclaim the night,
As is the norm ,as is the right,
Lusty sighs from a tavern wench,
Bring forth a pitcher my thirst I quench.

 

Walking this world alone I tread,
'Tis the earth I lay and make my bed,
Adventures much has come my way,
Here for a moment not here to stay.

 

I was born alone and alone I be,
Until the day life sets me free,
Loneliness comes like a lover she weeps,
Into my heart her tears they creep.

 

With my bag on my back and my thoughts to the front,
A builder must build a hunter must hunt,
And I must walk my path unknown,
Until I am dust and earth and bone.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this from a man's point of view.Be kind please

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"Loneliness comes like a lover she weeps,
Into my heart her tears they creep"

Powerful words. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem was so perfect...I read it aloud to get the full impact of your talent! You have described a solitariness that is all encompassing. Excellent work. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much my friend.

[Neon]

Before reviewing or giving you a review, can I ask, what "T" stands for?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay it is supposed to be 'Tis like "'Tis the season to be merry" my apostrophe was in the wrong place haha.It means "It is"

[Neon]

Ha! OH I C! I GOT IT! :)
Thanks for letting me know about it because I searched it on a net too but I couldn't know what's that but now I got it!
I give you a review on the write within the few seconds.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahahah you are hilarious my friend.You really do your best to understand what the writer is saying and that is very kind:P

[Neon]

Lol! Thanks! Once again, am honored to see some smiles on the face of an angel!

Well, yup, those words I don't get understand I usually use google to know about that particular words more in depth so that I could keep that one remember for long because my skills are what that helps me to make smiles on the faces of angels as same as I make you smile on your face coz, without words and their great usage at the right time at the right place you can't make someone happy or smile and of course, you can't grow and learn about more new things.
Now please don't ask, I searched about a word "Sex or Lust" or not, sorry, am not attempt to answering the question if you do ask! Ha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol...............:P

[Neon]

Thank God, you didn't ask!
Anyway, So what brings you so stunning to get the theme writing such an outstanding piece?

[Vidya Bacchus]

I don't know where the idea came from.I have had a bit of writer's block and when the dust settled this came to my mind.

[Neon]

Got it!
but I think you should keep your this sexy habit for ever because by doing this I can get some more chances to read such kinda sexy pieces with tavern wench sighs! Lol Ha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my god you are so funny :D

[Neon]

Lol!
Am I really so funny?
Then why don't ya come with me on a date in a day that's sunny?

[Vidya Bacchus]

For sure buddy I hear you:P

[Neon]

Holy-Crap!
I thought you'd say "No" because I think i've saved my money but you said "yes" then I think now my pocket gonna be "EMPTY" S**t! S**t! S**t!
Ha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Poor Neon you better dig deep in those pockets because I will be wanting an enormous cup of coffee like you sent the other day lol:)

[Neon]

Ha! You naughty one! You make me smile! You make my night!
You always make my days sexy by the words that's why I love talking to you!

Don't worry, pretty, when I'll be with an angel on a date someone, my pocket'd have enough money to let it flow on the beauty of beauties because after all, am gonna be a billioner and when I be a billioner, I'd be surrounded with the unlimited angels of the world INCLUDING YOU! HA! SO, that I could dig my pocket as deep as I could and so that angels could better scratch my back as deeeeeeeeeeeep as they could. HAHA!

OMG! You now got it! you just got it, pretty!
Am the hell yeah, sure you'd have an enormous cup of a coffee if you with me! ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes coffee the way to my heart.If I was a tavern wench I would serve coffee and drink my fair share.They would fire me I am sure:P

[Neon]

Ha! Thanks for the kind pleasure again!
Am sure you'd a tavern wench of someone who keeps you right into the arms of flowers and never hurts you.

OMG! but REALLY!
That means, "Wanderer alias Neon" gonna be in heave because I hope you'd love to take my advantage too there, wouldn't you???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol what to say to that????

[Neon]

Lol! I think, I've put into a diplomatic situation coz, now your confused what you say "Yes or No" because as earlier you said "yes" then I said, "S**t" because "Pocket gonna be empty" Hahah!

Am damn chuckling now!
Ha! DON'T worry, You can say, "YES!" BECAUSE I'd earn money after complete my study for what?? for angels, of course, for sure, after all, don't ya know, making angels happy and safe is "Neon's" "FIRST PRIORITY" Ha!
So, be cool! Empty my pocket as much as you can!
And "Scratch my back as hard as you can!" Ha!

By the way, don't ya think, I become damn hot and sexy after coming back to the site?

[Vidya Bacchus]

You looking for compliments my friend lol.You are as sweet as ever coming back to this site

[Neon]

Haha! You make me chuckle!
Well, I don't look for the compliments because it's your beauty that force me doing so. Lol
Thanks for the words, by the way, I know, Am hot so, please be aware, couldn't you burn yourself if you come near by me! ha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay I have been warned ,will try to keep a safe distance for fear of catching fire lol

[writ rajat]

I think this piece of writing,
often composed after brain fighting,
i am reading timelessly,
you are writing endlessly

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha thank you writ .Your words are poetry itself:)

[writ rajat]

you are welcome

[Ahena MK]

really nicely composed .... wonderful
ahena

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much:)

[Praveeta]

A lovely poem from a creative poet. I loved this write as well.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Praveeta your words are always appreciated:)

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this, surprisingly. Not big on the man's point of view. LOL. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

True I did know that about you.Thank you KL.

[A]

At the end of life the resignation and the hope to finally be free in his death...
It's lovely and sad... it reflects the loneliness so many men and women face at the end of their life’s...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Anabela your words are too true.

[Sheila Kline]

The endless wanderer finds his journey ended only at life's end.......how sad when one must travel on as one driven, one without peace, one striving to find something that mat not ever come to be. A very intriguing write! I especially like the third stanza as it has a profound message of how one yearns for more meaning to life!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much my lady Klein .Your words always mean a lot.

[SAYED THANGAL]

it has a spiritual touch,really thought provoking. A man is always alone, the birth, life and death. your observations are true

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Sayed:)

[Rod Dangers]

Third stanza....awesome. I loved the opening line of that and the continuation. The whole piece was ace, but that stanza, couldve been a poem on it own.
Thanks for sharing. Wouldnt have known you had writers block with this.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Rod your words are much appreciated:)

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent pen upon this...Thank you for penning and sharing...:).................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Much thanks Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

Muchly welcome...:).....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol..............:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)....................

[Michael Stevens]

An excellent poem, no matter who's perspective you wrote it from!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ah Michael long time no see.Thank you so much I have had a serious case of writer's block and this is all that came to me.I wonder what Winfred would say.....

[Michael Stevens]

Believe me, you DON'T want to know what Winifred has to say; hope the blockage is better now!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Good lord the blockage sounds like some terminal disease lol.Yes Michael I think so thank you:)