The Endless Wanderer

At the end of our life realizing that we are all alone.

                   The endless wanderer
Ebony skies  proclaim the night,
As is the norm ,as is the right,
Lusty sighs from a tavern wench,
Bring forth a pitcher my thirst I quench.

 

Walking this world alone I tread,
'Tis the earth I lay and make my bed,
Adventures much has come my way,
Here for a moment not here to stay.

 

I was born alone and alone I be,
Until the day life sets me free,
Loneliness comes like a lover she weeps,
Into my heart her tears they creep.

 

With my bag on my back and my thoughts to the front,
A builder must build a hunter must hunt,
And I must walk my path unknown,
Until I am dust and earth and bone.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this from a man's point of view.Be kind please

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"Loneliness comes like a lover she weeps,
Into my heart her tears they creep"

Powerful words. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem was so perfect...I read it aloud to get the full impact of your talent! You have described a solitariness that is all encompassing. Excellent work. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much my friend.

[wordman]

I thought it was a very good write
and it probally fits someone to the t

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is true .Thank you very much :)

[Ice]

This is beautiful...love the rhyme scheme

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Ice !!!!

[Anand Sehgal]

Ebony skies proclaim the night,
As is the norm ,as is the right,

you won my heart !
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I was born alone and alone I be,
Until the day life sets me free,


you get here a 100 from me :)
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[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey Anand ,thank you so much .How you going ?

[Anand Sehgal]

doing okay.. caught some cough and cold.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You got a bug just like writer's cafe huh ?I hope you feel better

[Neon]

My another review!

Yeah, this's really a very great write, here you've indirectly mentioned the true and honest feelings of a "Wanderer" (That's me .. lol) to "Tavern Wench" (That's you .. lol) because he doesn't hurt her feelings or body but keeps her save into his arms and makes her moan so that she could feel the peace and the heaven with his soft skins. Nice and a very honest write.

Keep writing!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You seriously reviewed me again Mr wanderer ?

[Neon]

Lol .. Am of my words, pretty! And what I say, I do because I hate lying :)
So, Mrs. Tavern Wench .. didn't you like I reviewed you again?

[Vidya Bacchus]

I live for reviews so I am in heaven hahaha ,Thank you :)

[Neon]

Haha! Am glad to see you in "Heaven" even you seem much beautiful in heaven ..
O' my God, even "Heaven" is your birthplace as far as I know, isn't it???????????????????????

[Vidya Bacchus]

True true since I am an angel i do live in heaven:)

[Neon]

O' what a Moron I am! Yeah, yeah, of course, You live ALREADY in a heaven ... lol
By the way, "Are you sure, "your devil doesn't hurt you much?""

[Vidya Bacchus]

I wonder..........

[Neon]

Lol! No, No, don't worry, If he does hurt you then it's ok ..after all, now your his property, how can I steal it from him?? SO, don't worry, I was just asking because I love seeing angels happy and mostly when they're in pain or their devils give them pain, "Neon" steal them for a while to make them smiles on their faces." Ha!

[Vidya Bacchus]

HAHA funny you :)

[Jack...]

This was so very cool. I love the feel and the texture of this poem. You have conveyed a man's point of view perfectly as well as expressing so much truth. I loved this poem.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Jack your words mean a lot :)

[Jack...]

You are welcome. Sorry I haven't been by to read more. I will remedy that directly.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh thank you that warms my heart to hear :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

"Veni, vidi, vici" my Vidya Vista.... V power here.
Through all your exquisite lines, my love.

compelling, truly, plus so touched by your quill...

- Elisa ♥

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your review in itself is sweet poetry.Thank you so much my sweet friend Elisa:)

You're ever so welcome my sweet friend, and I can't wait to come over more.... :D you write with pure passion, and feeling!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you again.Your words mean more than you know :)

So do yours love, on every single poem you read and reviewed of me... I'm ever grateful to you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwwww.................:)

[Nusquam Esse]

I really like this poem, especially those final lines; I imagine the man continuing to walk long after his body has failed, literally scattering what remains of him as he keeps dragging himself down his 'path unknown'. Very similar to what I most enjoy writing; in fact, in concept, this is similar to my first Short Story I wrote 'Alone in this Grave of Ours'. Kudos, and thanks for the good read.

[Vidya Bacchus]

And thank you for you wonderful review:P

[Neon]

Yup! Life is exactly the same and I hope he enjoys the sighs of tavern wench and hope keeps her safe as well..because making the lust with the beautiful women is not bad but good because if a man keeps a woman protective and safe in his arms and she feels good and enjoyable with him then it's good and it's what that life brings, but when it comes with the pain, the lust comes with the pain then, I must say, "it's bad" because, I don't think, giving the hurt, leaving someone into the pain only for your joy is what that God wants you to at all .. so this is a very powerful poem.

"It's a pretty Impressive write, pretty!"

The whole life of a wanderer you've dropped into the words of peace and truth with the tavern wench lusty sigh, I can hear the voice of her around me because to make the angels is what "Neon" loves either, so yeah, you can take me as a "Wanderer" and you as a "Tavern wench."
"But please don't scratch my back more!"

"Without pain! without hurt!
In the rain! love with the heart!"

Love should exactly be in a way that never gives pain but a very few people know about it, because everybody wants giving the pain into the depth of the heart.
The one thing, I daily analyze or discuss with mah mind that if a "love means love" then why the people give hurt? and if the love means sex and lust then again why the people give hurt?
Such kinda questions daily come on my mind, hit onto my mind and force me to think of it daily because I believe that if you want sex then sex should be without pain and if you want lust then lust should also be without pain because there's not a much difference b/w sex and lust, sex gives relief so does lust! but it's we who make it with pain and spoils the life with sexy fame... So I adore this write because "Wanderer doesn't give pain to tavern wench but makes her sighs and keeps her happy without pain and that's exactly what everybody should do. Do what!! Do, sex and lust if you want without pain and that's what "Vidya" you've already read in my new poem "HUMANS MAKE SIN" that's the message I leave there approximately related to love, because "LOVE NEVER GIVES PAIN, PRETTY" "But the hell yeah, love making angels sighs to hear the voice in whisper into the ear without lies, haha!"

Am going to save this write right now because you gotta be believing me that this write's become my "FAV." Write and it's in my top 5 list! And now if you think that by saving the write, am gonna steal your this write then ok.. I admit, Am stealing your this write, coz, I want this write in my portfolio" Ha!
I loved this! O' by the way, don't think, that I loving this write because it's me in your this write "A wanderer" who makes a tavern wench or sighs with happiness at all. I love this write because it's true and very powerful one.

AH! S**T! I WISH IF I WERE A WANDERER AND YOU BE THAT TAVERN WENCH"
S**T! MY BAD! I MISSED IT!
WHEN MY TIME COME! LOL!
Ha! ("Kidding")

[Vidya Bacchus]

OMG...You made me laugh again .Tavern wench me lol.Thank you Neon for your kind ,kind words they are always much appreciated:P

[Neon]

My pleasure! Wow! Am again honored to make an angel laugh! Because it's you what pours the beauty of all yours into the world with the Million-Dollars smiles :)

Keep laughing!
O' by the way, today if your alone at your home then you can become Neon's tavern wench and imagine be there with you but please don't "Scratch my back much with your long painted nails."
Ok??

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha good god you are comedian aren't you?

[Neon]

Lol! Are you now labeling me a tag of a "JOKER???"

[Vidya Bacchus]

If the cap fits lol.You are very fun:)

[Neon]

Nope, Nope, Nope, I hate playing Poker
Why an angel tagging me a "JOKER???????????"

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha you are getting it wrong on purpose eh ?

[Neon]

Lol! I ain't getting it wrong, it's your angelic beauty that's forcing me typing more and more before I start starring the angels on shore! Ha!
All good! Pretty!
Easy! easy! calm-kalm down!
don't worry, am not gonna come to touch your gown!
Come to me, o' pretty ...
Am not gonna love you on ground! Ha! ha! how funny is that!
Ha! (Sorry, it's just a joke, don't take personal)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol FUNNY .I see your intentions are to kill me with laughter .Well you are doing fine there :D

[Frieda P]

Bittersweet wanderings here, man or woman, we are all gypsies of life, we dance our way to the end, hopefully we find some meaning along the way before we revert back to starry dust...! Good job as a man Vidya! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I hesitantly take that as a compliment.The Idea that I was a good man lol.Thank you Freida your words mean a lot:P

[Frieda P]

Oh I meant it, and never met one of those...ha, only kidding guys. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Indeed KL Goode will agree with you there :P

[Frieda P]

Exactly, we have similar histories, that's what makes us so snarky. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes life does make us as we are .We either become snarky or melt away into the shadows.I prefer snarky anyday:)

[Frieda P]

My kind of woman ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

..........................:D