Who has conquered whom ?

love and lust collide and make a yummy concoction:)

                  Who has conquered who?

 

Sweet decadence resides in your eyes,

Blissful agony proclaimed by your sighs,

Ravenous desire burns up my will,

You're a sumptious banquet and I must have my fill.

 

There is no reality where you are not my drug of choice,

A heady concoction that steals away my voice,

Lascivious thoughts are consuming my soul,

Your total surrender my ultimate goal.

 

Heaven's angel or Devil's Spawn,

I accept you as either,all the faces you've worn,

Brands me a slave to your every whim,

My eternal soul mate because you surely are him.

 

Never before have I bowed to a man,

Laying my soul bare in the palm of his hand,

Trusting him to do me no harm,

Accepting me in all the colours I am.

 

So slaughter my fears and claim your prize,

See the truth reflected in my eyes,

I would fight dragons to be at your side,

So all I can say is "Hold on it's gonna be a hell of  a ride"

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea about this one.It came to me amidst a lot of pounding ear shattering music:)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The crafter of wonderful poems on love , pain , music and so forth. You touch us with all...:)..................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you sami I bask in your praise lol

[Sami Khalil]

You deserve it and more...You are welcome...:)......................

[Vidya Bacchus]

LOL...............:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[Sarah]

wow! the title has it! who really conquered who? Anyway this was a good write! well done!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you tweety!! Look out I think I taw a puttytat lol

[Sarah]

hehe yea:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sorry could'nt help myself lol:)

[Praveeta]

Well crafted poem on love. Thanks for sharing great poet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

ohhh thank you so much your words mean a lot:)

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome.

[Penny]

A subtle rhyming scheme, soft sounding words &"a not so soft and subtle topic..
This poem is well woven. Thumbs up!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you penny for your kind words:)

[Penny]

Ur welcum.

[Baby Ricochet]

Heaven's angel or devil's spawn. Some from column A some from Column B

[Vidya Bacchus]

True very true ,Thank you for your most intuitive words:)

[ron]

If the trust and feelings are there for each other, each of us would surrender to each other. If I found such a person I would command them to take me as their slave.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you know I hear they say good slaves are hard to come by.Would you be a good slave Ron?Thank you for the fine review:P

[ron]

I think I could be. But would you be a good slave to?

[Vidya Bacchus]

I would not .I suck at taking orders:)

[ron]

Maybe you just need the right encouragement and training :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Perhaps.But I don't train well either I am me and that is it.Take it or leave it I guess.

[ron]

Well I guess I would have to learn how to submit better lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aha that is it exactly .That I am guessing will be a very new experience for you lol

[ron]

Yes it would be. But I am willing to try it for the right person.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes that is as it should be.Hats of to you.I guess if I was wearing a hat that would work better lol

[ron]

Lol. I would be willing to switch from submissive to dominance depending on our mood and needs.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are a sweet heart:)

[ron]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

...................:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love the rhyming scheme to this one. I love the way it flows as well...
So seductive, and romantic kind of poem, very deep :)
I enjoyed it :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much.I was kind of wondering about it:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)