Who has conquered whom ?

love and lust collide and make a yummy concoction:)

                  Who has conquered who?

 

Sweet decadence resides in your eyes,

Blissful agony proclaimed by your sighs,

Ravenous desire burns up my will,

You're a sumptious banquet and I must have my fill.

 

There is no reality where you are not my drug of choice,

A heady concoction that steals away my voice,

Lascivious thoughts are consuming my soul,

Your total surrender my ultimate goal.

 

Heaven's angel or Devil's Spawn,

I accept you as either,all the faces you've worn,

Brands me a slave to your every whim,

My eternal soul mate because you surely are him.

 

Never before have I bowed to a man,

Laying my soul bare in the palm of his hand,

Trusting him to do me no harm,

Accepting me in all the colours I am.

 

So slaughter my fears and claim your prize,

See the truth reflected in my eyes,

I would fight dragons to be at your side,

So all I can say is "Hold on it's gonna be a hell of  a ride"

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea about this one.It came to me amidst a lot of pounding ear shattering music:)

Reviews

[costa siwale]

An incredible writing, this is an awesome piece..love it

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you costa I am glad you like it!!!!

[L4rn13]

So beautiful like a dance for domination between the two yet both are shown to be equal by the desire you express. I love this!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much for your kind words:)

[Ice]

Love the rhyming in this (:
This poem is pretty creative, and it's wonderful, you express a lot of your emotions on this.
Also I love the ending to the poem the last two lines
"I would fight dragons to be at your side,
So all I can say is "Hold on it's gonna be a hell of a ride"
Thanks for sharing!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you for the kind review it means a lot.I hardly write rhyming poems because you have to be careful the rhymes don't sound forced and the lines lame:)

[Ice]

I encourage you to rhyme in some of your poems. It's fun! But side effects come with writers block! >.< lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is very true lol and I will take your advice for sure:)

[emmajoy]

There's passion, delight, need and a smiling finish to this wonderfully created post. What a read, what a poem! Thank you so much for sharing. Happy Christmas to you and your darlings. x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you sweet emma joy and same to you and yours:)

[Daniel Sala]

What a well-written poem exploring emotions which we let ourselves willingly get carried away on for the pleasures they bring. Excellent piece, Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you daniel nice to see you:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

"hell of a ride," it was indeed! No need to doubt this one, it really does work.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww thank you poetic.I think we should all aim for a "hell of a ride"There is no other way to go lol.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I hear that and agree completely!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol.................:)

[Jordan's Back]

so very intence, and so just captivating. Excellent write.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my friend:)

[Jordan's Back]

Your very welcome :)

[Master K-tops]

This is one of the moments I wish poets where pop stars who could buy songs and make it their own. LOL. I wish I thought of that! Brilliant writing and effective use of figures of speech.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lord i feel drunk with your praise !!!!!Your words are ever encouraging and I thank you for taking a minute to read my work:P

[Master K-tops]

My pleasure.

[Lydia Shutter]

Suggestive, sensual, and so very intense. Accepting someone for all they are...warts and all....is what true love is all about. There is an urgency in the attraction you describe....very powerful. Good rhyming. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thanks much Lydi .Your words are most appreciated:)

[MsJewel]

Strong emotion in your slightly erotic words - quite powerful...
Heaven's angel or Devil's Spawn,
I accept you as either,all the faces you've worn,
Brands me a slave to your every whim,
My eternal soul mate because you surely are him.
Great writing!
:) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Much thanks dear julie:)