My Forever Knight

Knowing you belong with someone and they are all the things you would ever need

          My Forever Knight
Free me oh brave knight,
With the shiniest of swords,
Cut down my enemies with a swipe of your blade,
And with barely a word steal me away,
Upon your swiftest steed,
Away with me you ride.

 

Write me a verse sweet poet,
Say words to me that will never belong to another,
Bring tears to my eyes and kiss them away,
Bury me within your scented embrace,
Like the calmest of seas ,
Let me dance on your shore.

 

Build me a home dear lover,
Where our children's laughter,
Rival that of the greatest symphonies,
Nod your head contentedly ,
With a smile on your face,
As you let  me talk forever about everything and nothing.

 

Now you my brave knight,
Who recites prose and built me a home,
I bask in your reality,
Never worried that your love will falter,
Never happier than in your arms,
Never complete when you are not here.

                                 by vidya

Author's Note

Something different don't know if it is any good so please let me know.

Reviews

[magenta24uk]

I think this seems to show an underlying need to be rescued by our love and kept safe. We all need to feel that love and to Hero worship our chosen partner is no bad thing as long as we except their faults as well. In poetry we can forget the faults and live the fantasy. Nice.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is beautiful piece, and would surely make any "knight" yearn for his lady fair.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ahhh lovely words indeed Mr poetic,I thank you for these words that make me smile :)

[Raymond Federle]

"He is knight, dubb'd with unhatch'd rapier, and on carpet consideration, but he is a devil in private brawl. Souls and bodies hath he divorc'd three, and his incensement at this moment is so
implacable, that satisfaction can be none but by pangs of deathand sepulchre. Hob, nob, is his word; give't or take't." - Sir Toby: Shakespeare, 'Twelfth Night', Act 3, scene 4 >>>>> Your poem made me think of this. Truly excellent!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ohh I am honoured and much appreciative of your kind words.Thank you:)

[Cryingkate]

Have we shared the garden before I thinketh so..
Have we the likeness of sharing the same window?
I thinketh so.
Fear not, my Winged Lady
For the window of which your lookout view
beholds on light's of day
upon the garden where we planteth our roses Is the true reality :-)

Forgive me I forgot to say: Thank you. Thank you for work done at your window and work done laying seeds of word upon the valley below.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well that is beyond the most wonderful review I have ever gotten.I am humbled by your visit and thank you ever so much:P

[Cryingkate]

A curtsey to you Winged Lady, this is one I wish i could of wrote :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is most awesome compliment that I hold close to my heart,Thank you:)

[Cryingkate]

Here is a few tears to add to the memorandum's of heart by two touched as one.
I truly will be back to see all your seeds, fear not we have the same theme going sister writer.
Let it flow and together we will plant as many seeds as we can :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you much sweet poet:)

[genocide]

very good hon to bad you don't write about vampires

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha that is quite an idea.Thank you very much :P)

[wordman]

I was looking for sir lancerlot to ride in any moment and swipe you off your feet and ride away into the sunset

[Vidya Bacchus]

Me too dear frieng:)Thank yoy for reading :)

[ron]

This is so romantic Vidja. Wonderful and passionate.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you dear ron you have remembered to visit me lol:)

[ron]

I never forgot to visit you Vidja :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I take that as a compliment:)

[ron]

:)........

[Arcus]

The title captured my attention, and the body of the work kept that attention to the very end. I very much enjoyed this piece. It so wonderfully embodies the emotion of a perfect love, while remaining realistic in an understanding that not everything is perfect; a positive contradiction, if you will. It is just simply wonderful. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Again thank you so much for your wonderful words thay mean a lot:)

[Arcus]

You are most welcome. Such creativity deserves positive recognition. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Again I feel I should say thank you because your words are so encouraging.So thanks:D

[Arcus]

Hahaha. You are most welcome, friend. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol............

[anxia]

Nice things you expect of your knight :P.

[Vidya Bacchus]

True a knight is supposed to save the damsel lolThank you for reading:)

[annabellee]

what a beautiful poem!
Sweet and very well written.
thank you for all the pictures that your words painted in my head, like a little fairytale.
Great write :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes like a fairytale thank you dear, your words are most appreciated:)

[annabellee]

you are most welcome :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

I really enjoyed reading this, and I can certainly relate. You make great use of diction here; every word fits really well into the overall message of the poem. And the imagery here is really quite vivid...I can almost picture it in my head, happening in like the Medieval time period and it's just lovely. Really great job here, Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words are so nice thank you so much.Your kind review means a lot:)

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

anytime, my friend :)