Chasing the end

This world is to fast to chase, every day everything changes, everything upgrades...

I don't know the outcome, Actually I don't even care about it. But somehow I'm also a part of the chase.

I don't want to be.

My body moves automatically to follow the trail, But my mind is running in an opposite direction.

It's too hard to breathe in here. 

I've reached my limit. Won't be able to stand anymore.

Just waiting for the end_ 

Hope will find peace that day.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Normally I might say this feels a little sketchy, like it could use a little "filling in" of the details . . . but the sketchy breathless quality of your writing matches the message . . . I feel this guy rushing & stumbling becuz that's how your writing feels, almost intentionally so. This is very thought provoking. One has to consider it with face value (someone really wanting to "get off" this crazy merry-go-round) & also taking this as a metaphor (finding a new kind of existence, like I have here, living in the wilderness & forsaking all that modern crap -- I've never had a cell phone in my life & I'm 63 & I worked in IT for 10 years!) If you really do feel this way, then I encourage you to define your own existence . . . this is not a choice between what life is serving up or just giving up. We humans have the power to create amazing transformations in our lives! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Vidit V Kumar]

Hey Margie, Yeah I know this feels sketchy...I tried to connect the words in a simplest way to convey what I felt right there. I guess your first metaphor fits in and I hope I'll define my existence one day...
Regards
Vidit

[Betty Hermelee]

It seems that this person is physically chasing, but mentally not. This is a difficult position to be in. This person feels stifled, difficult to breathe, waiting to the end to come, while life keeps it chasing path.
Best, B