Lost Thoughts

Lost Thoughts

A Poem by Vidit V Kumar

Lost Thoughts...


I was lost behind my thoughts,
To carry the pain without any loss,
Killing the cost, making the laws,
That's all are the part of my flaws...

© 2019 Vidit V Kumar


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Vidit V Kumar
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This feels like self blame for whatever you are trying to accomplish. The last line really hits you; short, concise and meaningful. Nicely done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidit V Kumar

4 Years Ago

Well a part is self blaming, you've got it right. Thanks for the review Betty:)
Glad you like.. read more
Betty Hermelee

4 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on August 11, 2019
Last Updated on August 11, 2019
Tags: Lost, thoughts, lonely, alone.

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Vidit V Kumar
Vidit V Kumar

Meerut, Uttar Pradesh, India



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