VVVVVV

iv'e grown into someone unrecongnisable. i collapse at your feet smilling with my heart between your teeth. tell me you love me cuz its all it would take. forgetting how you laughed in my face throwing me away in your own little pace. falling back into a habit we shared. seeing you cry its not so fair. i told you i loved you and i wasnt prepared. what the f**k was i thinking

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[RAOrourke]

Matt I would say to go back and clean the poem up, capitalize, punctuation and spelling, it became distracting to read when these things became road blocks to your work.