Beautiful Nothings.

i asked a few to choose one poem for me to continue on. Though this is not what i expected to get out of that piece i still stand behind it and believe what it preaches. I hope you all liked it.

Nothing is Beautiful.

Everything can become nothing

within a blink of an eye. The site of something truly

Beautiful,

can make a grown man cry... Even tho tears are the truest form of emotion,

Some emotions shouldn't define us. Because with and without them.. We are still all

beautiful nothings.

Beauty...
Becomes our dagger.
Something of a bar to reach.
Yet every time someone reaches out.
This bar is raised.
Stabbing Juliet through the heart

Silencing our voice of  assimilation.

Through cryptic messages we send our ourselves...
waiting. Hoping today will not be our last.
Trial and error seems to be our guide.
Living and through regret,
breathing pain and damned regret till the day we die.

Sometimes its not enough is it.

These are just words you'll probably forget tomorrow. But when you wake up remember this... Though there is no rose by your pillow or lover by your side, there is still beauty. Beauty in the world and a hope that will not kill. You can not give up on life... it is impossible. Life is not controlled it does not breathe. But you do. you can only give up on yourself. You are truly beautiful.

We are the beautiful nothings.

peace..s

Author's Note

i asked a few to choose one poem for me to continue on. Though this is not what i expected to get out of that piece i still stand behind it and believe what it preaches.
I hope you all liked it.

Reviews

[indieRokker]

Nicely done man. Deep message your passing out.

indie♥

[Vannah]

I loved this. It actually made me feel food about myself for once, who cares what people think. It was amazing. thank you :D

[Solitary Dreamer]

I loved this piece. It made me feel hopeful. It made me feel special too. An it made me feel well....beautiful. Thanx for this awesome poem:)

[AllyKinzz:)]

Might I say i was surprised. This poem took a turn that I wasnt expecting. So what im trying to say is, great job. Beautiful, as said as in the poem, write. Great job. My favorite part has to be the last paragraph. :D keep up the great work.

review back on any if you want. :D

[Valentine]

I thought of the phone cal I got from my sister to quickly pray as our other sisters farm buildings were on fire and their home in danger, yes, everything can soon becopme nothing..thank God all that they lost is replaceable..valentine

[Jennika has a short att..]

I like it. It kinda made me feel like I was reading a book by Ellen Hopkins though :P Although I don't really agree with everything said, I do like the perspective behind this. I don't know why you think you think this is a 'piece of s**t', it's amazing, well in MY opinion(:

[Rain Kissed Secret]

It definitely has a message.