Pride

I'm coming down so bad. 

Was so happy but now my heart is gone.
Disappeared with the words we exchanged. 

Hate never knew a love that's so cold.
Death never knew a life that could want to end so badly.

Ending in the tragedies of old sayings.
Better to of loved than never breathed at all.
But with every breath I just want to leave

Forget all the hidden truths that u deceived..
My very heart and soul with.

Living is just a head game.
that spins the chamber into my mouth and pulls the trigger.

Hate that I'm coming down.
I forgot that i live in hell.
Destruction of all broken hearts
No one could ever rebel
Against the ones we love to hate

Living in fate that we just can't take.
A sun that shines....
We just don't understand.

Author's Note

thanks for your time. all reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Lucy Joan]

Nice expression of love and hate. It's paradoxical but sometimes people need it to feel sane. Awesome poem!

[D.L.G.]

you know?? i felt this. nice work!!!

[Valentine]

Always we feel lost when a love departs..but trust me...something much better is going to come along..Just be patient and do all you can to keep yourself busy...love will sneak up on you Matt...watch for it..lol and God bless..Kathie Deep write..

[Rain Kissed Secret]

You did a great job Matthew. I think you captured it most perfectly. ^-^ Thanks for sharin'.
Rain

[Micah_s5]

Liked the way certain things were worded, creative metaphors. Definitely think that your writing has matured and getting better and better.

[Emily Paige]

I fall inlove with your writeing the more I read the more I like it your writing is diffrent to yes you can relate to the situation but your writing seems to conect to the reader and what's in their head this is going in my favorites

[Comatose]

Again, the emotion put into this work is astounding. You are always able to portray your feelings so flawlessly...well done. :)

[Jennika has a short att..]

I'm glad I can finally read a poem from you. How long has it been 10 years? No? Well it seemed like it, and I missed reading them. Anywho, great poem and I hope you don't leave me hanging in the dust for another millenia. :P

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good write. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)