Brother

just a poem

First words are always spilling off my tongue.
But when i count the days scars my heart cant beat.
My breath runs short and i cant even speak...
Or even think of what to say to you.

Can i ask you why?
Why you said you had my back but when i turned,
you were never there or even try?
And why you said brother i love you.
When i needed someone you just said "F**K YOU."

Bring the girl i love home and you say f**k her too.
I said dude. What happened to you.
Why are you doing this.
You changed for the worse that you could ever be.
F**k our blood and forget our bond.
Walk out the door leave everything and look beyond...
Anything you can ever do to me again.

Break down.
Where the music stops and the beats slow down.
I turn walk to you with out a sound.
Look you in the eye and hope that your fake.
But you've never been fake.
F**k you then.

The disappointment is so often.
Old memories will never be forgotten.
Daily fights, Torn up relationship..
Like the rooms with holes in the walls that we fought in.

Get used to being alone.
I Make new brothers that are always there for me.
Who will lie for me, fight for me, die for me,
Get high with me. Hell and even when I'm doing bad...
I know they wont let me cry for me.
Pick me up brush me off.

Mention your name and i don't even cough.
Or choke at the thought of my brother that used to be.

Author's Note

all reviews and comments are welcome

Reviews

[Rain Kissed Secret]

It reminded me of when you are in a blues club, and they are reading their poems aloud in front of an audience. And for an applaud they snap. I'm not sure if you know what I'm talking about but it was amusing.

I liked your idea. I made a connection, so you succeeded. Thank you, for sharing this. ^-^

[Comatose]

This has to be one of the best I've read in awhile...the emotion is so raw and heartfelt, it's absolutely amazing. Great work :)

[Jessica Mai]

This is such a moving write. Your words really dig down deep. Great job

[MissWordSmith]

very nice, your words are so ... parallel... that's the best word i have to describe it. its like you're looking back at your past from a window. so close but so far. i loved this. keep it up!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good poem. Thanks for sharing with me.

[Sseoni]

Your poem was so intense and brilliant! I loved it! I could really tell that it was written straight from the heart! It was so powerful and a great poem! Another awesome poem! :D

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i really like this poem. the last two stanzas are my favorites!

[Jennika has a short att..]

Very good poem. Though I can't say much since I'm in Study Hall where everyone can read your 'vivid words', so I'm going to make this short and sweet. It was great and I'm sorry if you feel this way but it's what makes us human and better people.

[AllyKinzz:)]

This is deep. wow. thats all i have to say.

[Micah_s5]

powered fully by emotion. Alot of feeling behind these words.