A Place

lyrics to the tune of built for sin by framing hanely

There's a place.
A place that's old and new.
It's somewhere hard to find,
sort these broken hearts through and through.

You can drive all night.
You may be able to fight the fight.
But these words hurt more than the light.
Try and sort these broken lies.

No one ever knows,
how all of this starts.
But we all know how it ends.
Your choice to walk away,
it all depends.

There's a girl.
A girl i used to know.
She had a light all her own,
But she just couldn’t take it.


When love becomes just another lie,
and even hardened men start to cry.
That place is just for them.
Defenseless hearts don't defend.

There's a place.
A place that's old and new.
It's somewhere hard to find,
sort these broken memories through and through.

Author's Note

i wrote this to the tune of built for sin by framing hanely. also... there are no punctuation mistakes. i meant to write it that way. i wrote it how it is supposed to sound.

Reviews

[Millionth Muse]

Like the song...your piece does the tune justice I think. I really like the rhythm and beat of this, and it seems as though you got some good inspiration.

"When love becomes just another lie/and even hardened men start to cry"--great lines.

Might want to check on some of the punctuation. Overall, nicely done.

[Valentine]

Matt, I see that your work is really improving..I could feel a tune in this one..lol and God bless..Kathie

[.]

Haha, how weird, that's one of my favorite songs (and favorite bands!). I also really like the lyrics that you made too. They would fit really well with the song. Again, another piece of work!

Krista

[Ian]

Cool song i got into the flow of it this is great.

[Francez]

Great write! You picture the emotion & passion beautifully.
I love how the first stanza (sort of) comes back at the last.
The 3rd stanza sounds a bit weird to me, like it's kind of out of place. I haven't listened to the song, though.

[Moth Phoenix]

Nice lyrics. =]
I'm not totally sure what it's about, but I still love it.
Good Job!!

[AllyKinzz:)]

loved it. great job. i love your work. :D

[Chaos Complex]

I was really sucked into this one. I liked it a lot.

This part especially stood out to me:

"When love becomes just another lie,
and even hardened men start to cry."

(I know Muse beat me to it, but I had to say it. It realllly did.)

This was a powerful piece that gives you a glimpse of what it feels like when something you thought was true and beautiful may not be exactly what you thought it was.

[Living Proof.]

Awh I really, really love this. (:

[Aradie Rain]

Good lyrics, I'll have to look up the song and put the two and two together but this song has meaning too it, which is somthing songs now a days seem to lack. About the punctuation, thats good that you wrote it how it sounds, thats what your supposed to do. Poetry and Music have no true grammar rules except maybe spelling... :) great job, keep up the good work.
~Aradie

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much, good write, Matt:)