A Place

lyrics to the tune of built for sin by framing hanely

There's a place.
A place that's old and new.
It's somewhere hard to find,
sort these broken hearts through and through.

You can drive all night.
You may be able to fight the fight.
But these words hurt more than the light.
Try and sort these broken lies.

No one ever knows,
how all of this starts.
But we all know how it ends.
Your choice to walk away,
it all depends.

There's a girl.
A girl i used to know.
She had a light all her own,
But she just couldn’t take it.


When love becomes just another lie,
and even hardened men start to cry.
That place is just for them.
Defenseless hearts don't defend.

There's a place.
A place that's old and new.
It's somewhere hard to find,
sort these broken memories through and through.

Author's Note

i wrote this to the tune of built for sin by framing hanely. also... there are no punctuation mistakes. i meant to write it that way. i wrote it how it is supposed to sound.

Reviews

[Millionth Muse]

Like the song...your piece does the tune justice I think. I really like the rhythm and beat of this, and it seems as though you got some good inspiration.

"When love becomes just another lie/and even hardened men start to cry"--great lines.

Might want to check on some of the punctuation. Overall, nicely done.

[Micah_s5]

I really liked this one dude. Passionately powerful

[Jacqueline Lopez]

I think it's good. I like how you said... And even hardened men start to cry, because yes, love is that powerful.

[rockinmiley555]

i like it :) especially the "hardened men start to cry" part

[Taylor H.]

I liked this a lot.