Wonderful

my first happy sorta feel good poem

Hello wonderful.
The sky is cloudy today.
I'll wake you up with pleasure,
Hoping that you will stay.

Can we go for a walk?
Side by side.
Would we share our deepest thoughts?
Stride by stride.

I know sometimes,
we feel so empty.
Our minds begging for reality.
But the reliability of bliss is too much.

I don't expect forever.
Or even more than five minuets.
All i want to have is your gaze.
The feeling of your affection conflicted in haze.

Good morning wonderful.
Its a beautiful day.

Author's Note

Ok so this was my attempt at a happy slash feel good poem. Did i totally bomb my attempt or was it ok? all comments are welcome ^_^

Reviews

[rockinmiley555]

pretty ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

actually this is a very beautiful poem:)