Acceptence/denial

Acceptence/denial

A Poem by Matt

I’ve lost my voice inside the melody.
You’ve fallen into the shallow beat,
Of my heartless chorus.

 Light up just once more,
Lean on this habit of mine.

 I’m lost in all the memories you threw away.
And I can’t recall the day I said I loved you.

“Letting Go” is a cold b***h.

“Remembering you” becomes these lost lyrics.

Let go let go, run run run to me.
let go let go, so we can see
Just how much better she is without me.

© 2010 Matt


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this was good. You related your own pain into a way others could understand it, through a metephor "music", in your poem. Good Job
~Aradie

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You always have a way of putting your heart in your pieces.

Great work yet again. :D



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your a great poet

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"letting go" is a cold b***h and "remembering you" becomes these lost lyrics are great lines. LIke it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

change my mind.
This is the best I've read so far!
It expresses feeling very well.
*.*

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was amazing a grate write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2010
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Matt
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Fort Worth, TX



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