Blur

True Story about a guy I know.

You were in fact one of the kindest there is

never was there a detail you forgot or missed.

You did things randomly because you cared

It was then that all I could do was just stare.

I have never in my life met anyone like you

To me it was the first, just something new.

You said you’ve never seen anyone so beautiful,

my thoughts exactly, was the feeling is mutual.

I could look into your eyes forever if I could.

But I always questioned myself if I really should.

Your company, the kisses were all too wonderful

Deep down I knew we got too comfortable.

You expressed your feelings sooner than expected.

I am not upset you said it, we really connected.

I honestly was clueless on how to respond

Never have I met someone that felt as strong.

You and I knew I was leaving very soon

But we attracted and kissed beneath the moon.

You’ve said and done the sweetest things

But you knew my goal was to get my wings.

Consciously I was always questioning myself

Is it really you, or is there someone else?

I wasn’t sure I was in the same page you were

In my future I could see you, but in a blur.

I don’t want to force something manually.

I want to look at you and feel it naturally

Perhaps we need time for all this to become clear

Who knows maybe days, weeks, a month or a year?

Hopefully you’re not upset and understand

Give it time for our hearts and minds to expand.

Just give it time, but meanwhile let’s just be friends.

I am sure I will see you again this won’t be the end.

Reviews

[Leo]

Romantic and fresh and was easy to read from start to finish..very nice rhyme..a small typo in the second line just to replace "forget" with "forgot"..other than that it was a delight to read..keep it up
Feel free to visit my writings you might like one or two

[Victoria Castillo]

Thank you so much! I read A Lucid Dream! I loved the title, and to my surprise really enjoyed it :) keep it up! :)

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully capturing the connections unspoken, ruined by speech. As you say, these feelings are beautiful, but if you are both not on the same page, then time needs to be given for the other to catch up and see what is possible in the future. Nothing forced lasts and I am sure that in time they will understand this and wish you well.

[Victoria Castillo]

Thank you so much! I did not realize that people actually read poems here and give feedback, this is very cool! thank you for your comment! I ended up posting another poem. One of my latest and truest poem called my angel. Thank you again!! :)