Total Sacrifice

Total Sacrifice

A Poem by A.M. Victoria (LostWritings)
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Would you sacrifice everything for the one that you love?

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A piece of my mind you wanted,

A piece of my mind I gave,

A piece that told of peace and war,

Of children born and graves.

 

A piece of my heart you wanted,

A piece of my heart I gave,

A piece that told of kisses and slaps,

Of love and those depraved.

 

A piece of my soul you wanted,

A piece of my soul I gave,

A piece that told of religion and science,

Of beliefs and those who were saved.

 

A piece of my profits you wanted,

A piece of my profits I gave,

A piece that told of the rich and the poor,

Of mansions and alleyways.

 

A piece of my body you wanted,

A piece of my body I gave,

A piece that told of surgery and blood,

I’m gone but I’m glad I gave.

© 2013 A.M. Victoria (LostWritings)


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Good to sacrifice but not all. Do your best ...A splendid read and write...:)..........

Posted 11 Years Ago


A.M. Victoria (LostWritings)

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! :) Out of all the people who say that if their loved one needs their phys.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are right. And welcome...:).................

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Added on December 29, 2013
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A.M. Victoria (LostWritings)
A.M. Victoria (LostWritings)

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Once, when I was 12, I wrote a 365 page book. Then, it corrupted. So I rewrote it, and now it's even better than before. Some of my interests are archery, fencing, and the Civil Air Patrol. I als.. more..

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