The Butterfly Effect

The Butterfly Effect is about consequences and change. Just something I wrote while laying in bed.

Things change quickly.

More quickly than you will ever anticipate.

Everything will change.

Who your friends with,

What you listen to,

How you dress,

How you view life,

Who you are.

It’s funny really,

Looking back even a few months,

It’s baffling how much we change.

Without even noticing.

Our choices affect our future.

Like tumbling dominoes.

The butterfly effect strikes again.

Author's Note

This is the first thing I've wrote in a long time. Be as critical as you can. It'll help me in the future. And Thank you in advance!!

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

Again, I truly believe that you have very good ideas but much like my last review to you , I think that you can expand upon those ideas just a bit more. Now, the expressiveness of your work lacks very little. Your relaying true depth and addressing relatable subjects . I carry around a journal for jotting down ideas that might come to mind throughout the day. Not necessarily final drafts but more importantly ideas that I can later expand upon. At first this can be awkward but after a while you'll find the ideas just pouring out of your mind. I hope that I was helpful. Don't stop writing.

[Valentine]

Very truthful words, in live we are in a constant change, be it friends, jobs, homes, I like your word usage, keep writing. Valentine