Numbered Flaws

Numbered Flaws

A Poem by Vanessa P
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This is a work in progress so please be kind. I needed somewhere to put it while i'm thinking.

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Numbered Flaws

 

I can list out

All the things

I see in me

That I don't want

To see

 

The things

I wish to change
I wish to be better

If only I had the will

 

One is my stature

For I am overweight

Lose a few pounds

I sure wouldn’t mind

 

Two would be my breasts

They were limited to an A

Then third would be my waist

Lose the 10 inches I've gained

 

Fourth is my skin

Wishing it were flawless

But instead covered in zits

Specially my face

 

Fifth would be my height

A few inches wouldn’t hurt

Though I still wouldn’t be a model

At least I can reach

 

I can go on with this list

It'll be never ending

But that'll be torture

For I am depressed as it is

 

 

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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