Eternal Love

Eternal Love

A Poem by Vanessa P
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Indeed tis I, Frederick

I'm unable to rest in peace

Held by a promise

We sworn to keep many moons ago

To spend eternity together

Wasn't that the plan?

Where are you now

My honorable knight?

Have you already forgotten

Your love for me?

I pray that you don't

Break my no longer beating heart

For my scorn shall last forever

Living in my immortal soul

© 2008 Vanessa P


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Oh I love the way this sounds spoken, it's beautiful and yet sad. Very good!
keep writing, keep reading

D. Suhcej N. T.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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