It Could Be Us

It Could Be Us

A Poem by Vanessa P
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Could you picture you in black?

Could you picture me in white?

 

Would you be ready then?

Do you see us that far in life?

 

When the words are finally spoken

And all the witnesses have signed

 

Do you think it'll be a beginning

Of something really nice?

 

Could you picture yourself

Waking up in the middle of the night?

 

Could you picture me

Be the mother of your child?

 

I guess we'll find out

When the time comes for us

 

We can imagine our perfect world

But we'll just have to be surprised

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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It reads like a spoken word piece. It has a good flow with a nice little turn at the end.

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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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