Lost Innocence

Lost Innocence

A Poem by Vanessa P

In you I've lost my soul
Willingly
I gave you my all

You raped me
Of my innocence
And my grace

Stripped me
Any signs of kindness
Til I was no more

But yet
I gave in to you
Over and over

Because my desire
Is you
And only you

© 2008 Vanessa P


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I too feel your pain.... very deep... very well written!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW, this is such a sad story line�

Well written, but sad..

I can feel the pain in these words

Well done�


Posted 16 Years Ago


Boy, talk about your guilt trip, you could thaw the coldest of heart with a little poem like this one. Seems poems I read today leave me wondering about the story behind them, hope this one is fiction for you or at least has a happy ending.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 25, 2008

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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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