The Angry Voice

The Angry Voice

A Poem by Vanessa P
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It's 8 am

And I'm already screaming

I know its my fault

But it's you I'm blaming

 

What triggers my anger

I'm not quite certain

But I wish I could stop

And let you be

 

At times I feel like

I turn to a green monster

Each and every time

I get so upset with you

 

Don't think that I hate

Or that I'm resentful

For having you in my life

Because that will never be

 

My love will always be

Here overflowing

Even if I can't show it right

I'll forever Love you

 

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


Author's Note

Vanessa P
At the moment I feel guilty for having a spat with my daughter. She's 3 1/2 but sometimes I forget that she's only a little kid.

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emz
So true, i remember having those same feelings when my son was that age..... Kids eh? Who'd have them lol.

Very honest write i liked it alot


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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read this cold and without your note. I did not see it a child you focused on. That was a nice surprise. Love after all, is love. This one you should keep for when she reaches 16, you may need it again!

Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how sweet to turn anger to love ,
if the world did what you have master,
reality would be as a dream..
love ur write ,love ur way ,,of hanging in there the green monster just blue me away..peace wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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