Longing

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I don’t know how to be
Where to lay my head
When my confusion overwhelms me

I don’t know what to do
When all I could think of
Is how I could be with you

I don’t know how to feel
My heart feels lost
My mind constantly wandering

Struggling to set aside
All these doubts and uncertainty
That’s corrupting my love

Tears trickling down
Like a storm of misery
Cause you’re too distant to hold

Do you feel this?
Do you see how much I need you?
Do you understand my aching?

I want you here
Because you’re a part of me
That makes me whole

Reviews

[WordMaster]

A poem on a subject we all know a great deal about

I know the feeling you wanted to convey, I just didn't feel it � maybe because I've heard this theme so many times before?

You have the emotion, now get it on paper in a way that makes your writing one of a kind!

[emz]

I loved this poem, it was realy well written, very moving



emz
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[Tomás Ó C..]

Love, it is a terrible thing!!!

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"I want you here
Because you're a part of me
That makes me whole"
That sums it all up. A touching write. It felt like the heart is in conversation with the mind.