MY SELFISH HEART

MY SELFISH HEART

A Poem by Vanessa P
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My Selfish Heart

 

It's bleeding

 

Oh see how it bleeds

 

It bleeds for you

 

Endless drops of blood

 

Turning into a pool of shame

 

I can't stop bleeding

 

I can't run away

 

I'm cut open

 

I have no clue why

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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They say loving hearts don't break: they get wounded and bleed love to heal with love. Though a loving heart may make a foolish mistake, I doubt if it's selfish in the absolute.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not impress with this write ,
can't find the meaning nor see what the title has to do with a bleeding heart,
endless drops of blood ,for love,,how repulsive ..i am sorry i just read another of ur writes and was impressed thios needs to go back into the creation room,,just my opinion ,others may read feel diferently,,wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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