When Lips Touch

When Lips Touch

A Poem by Vanessa P
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Trying my best to describe what a kiss feels like...

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It’s like the world could stop

It’s like climbing a mountain top

It’s like a perfect day

It’s like the heart melts away

 

It’s like an enchanting song

It’s like a sexy thong

It’s like a delicious dish

It’s like the purest wish

 

When lips touch…

 

The best feelings come alive

All the fun begins after five

My spirit is awaken

There’s no mistaken

 

It’s an other world explored

Everything else ignored

The only thing I aspire

Is my infinite desire

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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Beautiful! =]

I love it!!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I can see how a kiss can be like that. I don't know about the best fn beginning after five, though. A wonderful and sweet write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 5, 2008
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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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