If Life Was Indeed Fair

A Poem by Vanessa P

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If life was fair
You'd see my smiles

If life was fair
You'll hear my laughter a million miles

If life was fair
I wouldn't want to hide

If life was fair
My worries would simply subside

If life was fair
You and I will get along

If life was fair
Then how will I learn to be strong

© 2008 Vanessa P

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wizthom

love the truth in this write ,beautiful

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kat_apult

Ironic that the very thing (life) that is so hard and troublesome at times is also the one thing that makes us stronger as we struggle through it all...very nice message here! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I hope life is/ will be fair. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 15, 2008

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Vanessa P

Heights, NY

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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..