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It's a dark crescent night

I feel a tingle in my loins

I watched in silence

As my new prey stumbles and falls

 

It delights me to see

Her beautiful skin illuminating

From the moonlight

Tasty and inviting

 

Just the thought of me

Feeding off her

Soon to be corpse

Gives me orgasmic pleasure

 

Her thick blood I seek to have

Quench my insatiable lust

So red and pure

Suck it in til no more

 

Let me descend with haste

Before she turns to spoils

My hunger must be satisfied

During the absence of the sun

Reviews

[Geist]

"It delights me to see
Her beautiful skin illuminating
From the moonlight
Tasty and inviting"

These are by far my favorite lines of this really, really great poem. It's dark, it's visual and it makes me wanna write my own great vampire piece. I love it! Awesome-o job. ;)


Geist