Inside Your Hand

Inside Your Hand

A Poem by Vanessa P
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The rain just sprinkles slowly

As the water hits my window

And the world is calm

I think of how wonderful

It would be

To have my hand rest

Inside Your Hand

Our fingers would entwine

With such comfort in your eyes

Rest my head on your shoulder

Enjoy this moment in silence

I never thought

Something so simple

Could mean so much to me

More than words can ever say

It's just hard to explain

Now each time it rains

I'll think of this feeling

Catch me day dreaming

Of the day when my hand

Resides inside your hand

© 2008 Vanessa P


Author's Note

Vanessa P
I was driving to work when this poem's soul came to me. I finally got it into words.

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Ah, how sweet and poignant..nice imagery and repetition of "inside your hand"...I could really feel the special simplicity of the moment...a single quiet moment of love expressing the depth of your feelings! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot... Really lovely sentiment beautifully put into words.. Anyone who's ever been in love can certainly relate. Nice :)
LGD

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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