Did I?

Did I?

A Poem by Vanessa P
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Did I make your heart ache?

Did I leave you in a state

You didn't want to be in?

 

Did I break your spirit?

Did I make you long for an embrace

I had no intention of repeating?

 

Did I cause you to whimper?

Did I give you a reason to cry

When you've not cried once in your lifetime?

 

Did I act cruelly towards you?

Did I take away the love

That once brought joy in your life?

 

Did I leave you alone?

Did I die and not tell you

That I truly loved you so

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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I absolutely loved this one. Because this is about me.
I did all of these things. And more. There is no way to make amends now.

This poem has touched me where it hurts the most.



Posted 16 Years Ago


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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