The Comfort In You

The Comfort In You

A Poem by Vanessa P
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There is this feeling

I can't quite describe

A subtle dose of comfort

That keeps me

From falling apart

 

A sweet sounding voice

Echoing, serenading me

It travels through the distance

Of the predicament

In which you and I are in

 

Though physically

You are unable to

Hold me close

I still feel the security

That flows through your voice

 

Rest assured my dear

Your intentions are not lost

For I am quite certain

No one has ever come close

To giving me the comfort

I found in you

 

© 2008 Vanessa P


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Though physically

You are unable to

Hold me close

I still feel the security

That flows through your voice

Seems like you and I have been through similar experiences. I have felt a lot of assurance and comfort in his love. And whenever I think of the past, even today I can still feel that way.

Rest assured my dear

Your intentions are not lost

For I am quite certain

No one has ever come close

To giving me the comfort

I found in you

I love the stanza. I wish I could convey this to him somehow but it is not possible.

Brilliant write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Though physically

You are unable to

Hold me close

I still feel the security

That flows through your voice

Seems like you and I have been through similar experiences. I have felt a lot of assurance and comfort in his love. And whenever I think of the past, even today I can still feel that way.

Rest assured my dear

Your intentions are not lost

For I am quite certain

No one has ever come close

To giving me the comfort

I found in you

I love the stanza. I wish I could convey this to him somehow but it is not possible.

Brilliant write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY



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