You Make It Hard For Me

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ORIGINAL:

You make it hard for me

Not to think of you every minute

For each moment that passes

Feels so dull and lonely without you

 

You make it hard for me

Not to say even just a sweet Hello

My heart just flutters with excitement

Knowing you're waiting to hear from me

 

You make it hard for me

Not to feel special from your small gestures

Every word you speak is so sweet

And everything that you are is charming

 

You make it hard for me

Not to fall deeper and deeper in feelings

Because I love to be loved

Specially when I'm being loved by You

 

 

REVISION: 

You make it hard for me
Not to spend each minute
Thinking of you

Each moment passed
Feels lonely and dull
Without you

You make it hard for me
Not to smile
When I say "Hello"

My heart's fluttering
With excitement and cheer
Knowing you're waiting

You make it hard for me
Not to find myself special
Even through small gestures

Each word you speak
I feel the sweetness and love
Enveloped in your charm

You make it hard for me
Not to fall deeper and deeper
With these feelings

Because I'm loving
The way that I'm loved
Especially being loved by you

Reviews

[Imperfection]

It's strange but I can relate to this one too.

It feels important, special to be loved by someone who is such a fantastic person at heart. Unfortunately we aren't together anymore. But it's because of him and his wonderful qualities that it's so hard to get over the past.

Excellent write. I enjoyed it very much.

[Kelly D. Burris]

You so beautifully capture the intertwining of thoughts and feelings people go thru at the start of a meaningful relationship. The caring for each other expressed, the excitement....
Nice piece.
Kelly