As I Live and Breath

002019008 943A After listening to the song "No Air" by Jordin Sparks feat Chris Brown

 

The words still resonating in my head

The melody trapped within my ears

I can say that's exactly how I feel sometimes

When I'm not able to have a moment with you

 

To not know you now would be a lie

To not have feelings for you

Would feel like something died

Inside of me

 

So what would I be able to say or do

If there was no you to talk to

Or a you to feel something for

 

How would I be on those days

Back when you were still an unknown face

 

It's quite strange after days passed

You became a part of me in an instant

A part of me that will live on

Even after I'm gone

Reviews

[Kat_apult]

V, you continue to astound me with the depth and emotionality of your poems! This latest poem has once more drawn me in and spoke to my heart! The connection we can feel for another person as if it is a living, breathing entity...and takes on a life of its own inside our minds and hearts. My favorite lines:

So what would I be able to say or do
If there was no you to talk to
Or a you to feel something for

The changing within ourselves when we are affected by the presence of someone in our lives...and when they are gone, the ways we try to cope...Wonderful! :)

[Bubo]

It's strange, I am reminded of a child. You could be writing of a lover or child, but I guess lover..........I loved the emotional journey in this.........almost sorrow, that someone has become so apart of you, life cannot be
lived without...........

How would I be on those days

Back when you were still an unknown face


I often think this when looking at Snotface, trying to remember life before him, and how on earth
did I do stuff without him............its a weird way to think!
I love this......very strong.