Meeting the Captain

Imagine a beast of measureless bonds its very treads shaking cities its skin like that of a gods. No blow may land and no arrow may pierce this creature. This monster that took everything from me. My family and all else that I held dear. They say in tragedy a man can be reborn. A new   I have experienced this rebirth. And it is then that I became what I am. No longer a man. No a man would have died long ago from chasing this creature. I became something of legend an avatar of vengeance. Held together by only pride and madness. My body changed for pursuing that which I hate. That which I need.   I am the captain of this vessel and you will all live and die pursuing that which I hunt. I will lead you through the maw of hell itself without question and each of you I will shepherd like my own sons. But should one head fall out of line I will personally burry you in the darkest corners of your existence before jettisoning you out into the icy blackness that is the waters below. Is this clear!?  … Good now let us begin. I am your captain and your god for all purposes on these waters. Stay loyal and faithful and you will make it through this alive. Perhaps mutilated but alive. I am captain that is my name and my creed. Forget either and I will tear out your heart personally- Meeting the captain 1912.

Reviews

[Zebrina]

Gosh, i love this, that's just it. You literally brought a character to life. Even though he seems like an undesirable person to meet that doesn't keep me from wanting to know more about him. I often have trouble bringing my characters to life. You do it so effortlessly!!!! i am jealous! lol :)