Nightingale! O, Nightingale! (L'œuvre de Natuer I)

...just the first poem in the collection.

Nightingale, Nightingale,

O, how graceful it moves,

Lurking,

Stalking,

Adhering your every move.

What they don't know,

the Nightingale observes.

It often spectulates upon arrival,

like a guardian angel perhaps.

 

Nightingale, Nightingale,

Take a trip with me.

Graze,

Graze the wheat fields,

on a summer night.

It is free,

free to roam this land.

Sing Nightingale sing,

melodiously sing.

O, how I wish

I could also run my fingers

through its soft russet feathers.

 

Evermore,

You are adorn,

Nightingale! O, Nigtingale!

Reviews

[xxxxxxxxxxx]

Lovely and vivid. Very professional. I also like the title, how it's repetitive and the French.

[Tate Morgan]

Ah dont we all wish we could fly

[Tina Kline]

Impressive, such outstanding and vivid imagery, like the positive tone to this, mixed in with a little longing to be free to go with the nightingale.

[CircusNerd]

wow, the imagery here was fantastic. i feel the nightingale represents someone who's reached a higher pinnacle, and you're asking them the show you the way there. anyways, this was beautiful, and thanks for the add!