My Leter, To You

I tried to put myself in the perspective of a fighting soldier across seas. So, I wrote a letter that the soldier might write to a loved one.

Worry not dear,

for I'll be there.

Don't you fret,

Don't you tear,

Don't you tremble,

Don't you fear.

For when time comes,

I'll be here.

Overseas I struggle.

My agony...my pain.

The deep sadness

driving me insane.

Through the storm,

and through rain,

My hope and courage shall remain.

 

For one day,

I know I will be home to stay.

Reviews

[Brandee D. Hack]

My word. This is really beautiful. You have talent here. I like your three words in a line. It's a great talent to be descriptive with so small amounts of words. I rather enjoyed this. Please feel free to take a look at my work, you might enjoy it. :) Also, a very sweet couplet at the end. :)

[xxxxxxxxxxx]

Beautiful. Like a poem from a loved one overseas in the war.

[Dark Empress]

Aw, this is really beautiful. I think i got a tear in my eye reading this. Very good poem. Love the writing style of this one. Very touching, indeed.

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is very sweet, great peice..