My Very Little Love Ballad

this poem tells a story about a certain girl and my feelings about her..gosh i really dislike love ballads though

Do you feel for me not

yet so, do I suprisingly accuse you

of sorrowly expressing your friendship in an open hand

My fate not be determined by you,

restingly, I am not.

Dependingly with you

I seemingly won't aim towards.

Then is my companion as close as is destined

unknowingly by fate

Expressions crossing my mind

Deep thoughts and secrets untold,

we share, do we not.

Yet I feel suprisingly cold, lonely...can't feel your presence,

your beingness, your warmth.

Oh I await the moment

you curingly imply that you are mine.

Hand in hand, I feel it should be

No, fate is a deep factor!

Fate shall determine my destiny

with you, or without.

Can a man decide his outcome, I ask myself.

Fate shall be with me,

and luck I need not.

I have not aimed to seduce you

with charming words,

closing you into my my will, naively.

Character, I imagine, is what have drawn you to me.

You being, have led me to want you.

Does fate work against me

Do I look for what is not there

Do I seek for what shan't be seeken

Do you pose to be what I secretly desire

Do I dream the undreamable

Do you fear not?

Do I wrongly take what seems as an innocent gesture of pity

an turn it into a liking not felt

a connection not carried on.

It is you I desire...

Brazen, sure, impudent, content, exhuberant,

suprisingly tacit, you seem.

Joy, love, ecstacy, rapture.

I feel you,

you connect with me,

we widely, intelectually converse as two beings.

Crestfallen, I had felt

when I thought you weren't the one for me.

Disappointed, I had been,

when infact it was love you do not seek.

 

Reviews

[Brandee D. Hack]

This piece is so powerful. You can feel everything from confusion to love to heartbreak to ecstasy. It's such a lovely talent to be able to make your emotions leap off the page. I really loved this piece. :)

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

oh wow...thtz amazing...