Little Something

Lyrics I wrote for a song can be found at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvLSuGXIONA&feature=youtu.be

Little something

Everything is blurry 
She cannot see herself 
The smoke is all around her 
And it’s messing with her head

She feels as if she’s dreaming 
But she cannot fall asleep 
Another puff will help she thinks 
And she doesn’t care
About the consequences

But she just wants to run away 
Free herself from everything 
The pain is killing her with every
Second that she stays 
And she knows he wouldn’t notice 
If she disappeared forever 
So she takes a little something 
To make herself feel better 

She wears a mask that hides her pain
And no one knows at all 
That when she’s acting happy
She’s falling deeper inside a hole

And when she sees him with her
She cannot bear the pain
Everything is spinning 
She needs some type of medicine

But She just want to run away 
Free herself from everything 
The pain is killing her with every
second that She stay 
And she knows he wouldn’t notice 
If she disappeared forever 
So she takes a little something 
To make herself feel better 

Every time she takes more 
She looses herself 
And the cigarettes don’t help no more
She needs her little something more

But she just wants to run away 
Free herself from everything 
The pain is killing her with every
Second that she stays 
And she knows he wouldn’t notice 
If she disappeared forever 
So she takes a little something 
To make herself feel better 

She cannot recognize herself 
She is completely lost 
Her little hands shaking 
As she takes another dose

But she just wants to run away 
Free herself from everything 
The pain is killing her with every
Second that she stays 
And she knows he wouldn’t notice 
If she disappeared forever 
So she takes a little something 
To make herself feel better

She never got to live her life 

The way that she had planned

That little something took her life

Without giving her a chance.

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Reviews

[Wiif]

I like this, you give us a hint of her feelings and we're able to dive into her head, wanting to forget can be fatal sometimes, just like wanting to be noticed is too
"And she knows he wouldn’t notice
If she disappeared forever
So she takes a little something
To make herself feel better"
This also makes me think of how dependent and non-self-confident can girls be, and how bad this affects their life choices.
Excellent, continue with the good work :)

[Vera Fnk]

Thank you so much! That was what I was aiming for and I'm so glad that it does leave a message :)

[Baby Ricochet]

A lotta little something will do it every time

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hmm very nice the end is perfect!

[Vera Fnk]

Thank youuu :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Mélania Woolf]

Death is no illusion when life turns into black ... It's that someone who makes it worse day by day !
Beautiful lines and beautiful sad story
I liked it ^__^

[Vera Fnk]

That's very true :( Thank you and I'm happy that you liked it :)

[A. Amos]

what a enjoyable read from the beginning till the end and love the last lines...simply amazing

[Vera Fnk]

Thank you so much :) I'm so glad that u like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice flow of words. I like the journey and thoughts in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I will go and listen to the Youtube.
Coyote

[Vera Fnk]

Thank you :) It makes me happy to know that you like it :)